I lost you..

by Emily55555   Oct 8, 2005


I woke up this morning...
and realized you were gone
How could life have been so perfect
and then have gone so wrong
How come come your world's still turning
While mine is standing still...
How did you go and make this hole...
that no one else can fill?
How are you sleeping soundly...
While I lie here awake...
Why are we both smiling...
but only mine is fake...
How come you dont miss me..
How come you dont mind..
How do i fill this emptyness
that you have left behind
How can i tell my heart
that it must stop loving you
How are you so over this
and im barely getting through
So i guess that this is it
I know I'll never love again...

oops got lazy... i'll finish it later ssorry guys

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  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I think this is my favprote poem of yours, truly tremendous, wonderful emotion, so passionate!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    100/100 I liked this poem very much. I will keep reading it again and again. Each line contains deep emotional experience.
    ....
    "How come come your world's still turning
    While mine is standing still...
    How did you go and make this hole...
    that no one else can fill?"
    ........................
    "How are you sleeping soundly...
    While I lie here awake...
    Why are we both smiling...
    but only mine is fake...
    .........Real Gems, Diamonds, Gold.

  • 18 years ago

    by holly

    Fantastic start to the poem :D cant wait till you finish it :D
    x ally x

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Omg the best I read today! 5/5!

  • 19 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    Good poem...really really good:)

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