Aww hun, so sad yet so beautiful as always. stay strong.
-xXx-

I thought it was really good!!.. and its so true..i wish i knew wat to say! nice job. xx

If somebody absolutly didn't care then they wouldn't want to know what someone could say to make them feel better...so really you wouldn't have to say anything to someone who didnt care lol but anyways this was really good except the few spelling errors (i know minor but they should be corrected anyways) you used *don't* when you should have used *dosn't* and also instead of writing *know* you wrote *no*

but other then that great job i really liked the message this poem put out kinda like the helpless feeling that nobody can save you because your just a lost cause or something like that idea great job...5/5 i love your writing and enjoy reading it!!

Wonderful, Sad but oh so true, stay strong, man I wish i knew what to say

Love Jenn

Great job... again-- a piece of work that was really deep... you're talented

Keep writing..

Love,
Ipsita

Really great poem, and very true. take care xxx

Hey, this was a really good poem. i loved it. thanx for the comment! 5/5