Lost in my Conscience

by amber   Oct 8, 2005


I'm stuck in my conscience
without a place to go

I'm lost in my mind with all my desires that makes staying in my conscience fine

But I'm always lost in my misery and stuck in my pain

I'm lost in my conscience and only you can help me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Again a unique write, witch is what made me like it. You did another excellent job. please keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Polly

    I like this, it's like your own thoughts directly onto paper (or computer hehe). I like your style, but perhaps you could expand on the things you say so other people have a better understanding? Take care
    - Polly

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oops, I just realised I've already comment this :O oops. lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This was really good. Had a great message within in it. But.. I do think you can get alot deeper in this. Like with the line; "But I'm always lost in my misery and stuck in my pain"
    Try and explain the pain that you feel. Just a little tip. But I still loved it. Keep writing 5/5

    `natalie ♥ ♥ ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked this one alot. It was very short. Yet straight to the point. I love this line; "But I'm always lost in my misery and stuck in my pain" I can relate to that so well. Keep up the great work 5/5

    luv natalie x-x

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