Shedding Immortality

by Whispering*Willow(Mercedes)   Oct 8, 2005


Cold, lonely ember
Died out suddenly
Alone without illumination
Remembering what I don't want to remember.

I can't feel the spring coming
(The cycle of new life)
I'm still dead without you
Winter was so white and numbing

I was enervated
The wait for a new day broke me
Falling out of my sturdy grip
Like they had anticipated

No goodbyes this time(for me)
The dark burnt through my soul
Giving up what I didn't want to give
Shedding immortality.

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  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Nice...5/5

    Mallori

  • 18 years ago

    by Whispering*Willow(Mercedes)

    Wow....thanks for all the comments...you all give me so much inspiration to become more dedicated in my work of writing poetry!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    5/5 deep comment on my poems and vote to please -Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    5/5, sounds like somthing I'd write about a full out heavy DXM trip.. FAR OUT MAN! lol, nice work, nice read, I liked it

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Great dark write. I loved the concept. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

    Thank you so much for your comments on my "devils delight" means alot to me.

    Kisses
    Hayley

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