Comments : Shedding Immortality

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Amazing!!! keep it up.

  • 19 years ago

    by jhosy

    Good poem. I like it keep the good work up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Whispering*Willow(Mercedes)

    Thank you thank you.

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Great dark write. I loved the concept. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

    Thank you so much for your comments on my "devils delight" means alot to me.

    Kisses
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Ian Robert

    5/5, sounds like somthing I'd write about a full out heavy DXM trip.. FAR OUT MAN! lol, nice work, nice read, I liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Liz

    5/5 deep comment on my poems and vote to please -Liz

  • 18 years ago

    by Whispering*Willow(Mercedes)

    Wow....thanks for all the comments...you all give me so much inspiration to become more dedicated in my work of writing poetry!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Nice...5/5

    Mallori