Really good poem 5/5 ^_^ Take care and keep it up! Nice job.

You need to edit it.But if it made more sence than it would be really good

Ok well i know ive read this b4 but it didnt make sence wen i read it and now that im reading it again ITS A REALLY GREAT POEM..and umm i really want to talk to u ...so wen u get a chance call me or sumthing ...but umm yea so great poem..and forget about the other comment cuz this is an amazing poem!!!
x3 lizz

Wow.. its sounds so poetic