by Lady Li
Very nice beth |
Aw !!! I love this it's so sweet !!! It's written well aswell. |
by sandra
AWW!!! I'm SO Happy for you! Great poem. You Love Nick!!! ttyl! 5/5!!! |
Aww i liked that, very cute i hope you too stay together and share many more kisses :) this is a good poem but keep an eye out for speeling mistakes k? |
Aww congrats..im 14 2 i got my 1st kiss like about 2 weeks b4 u..neway GR8 poem! wow...u rok! keep up the gr8 work! im tryin 2 find sumthin bad but i cant..so yea...wow. |
by amber
I'm happy for you. Not everyones first kiss is sooo special. Your a lucky one lol |
by Jamie
Not your best, the rhymes were weird and everything but i think this deserves a 5 just because how cute it is and it's amazing that your first kiss was this special to you, i can't even remember mine. anyways i think this is a wonderful poem because you put so much expression into it. |