No girl...that's not what i think...i think you are great girl...a tough girl...so beat it girl...you can do it...let happiness take away your sadness...and you know what...i finally able to finish my poem...change the title...it's Complete For Now...check it out and tell me what you think okey...And hey...email me if you need to talk...i reply to you ASAP...

*hugs* I hope your okay hunn, if you need to talk just PM me alright? I love yeh
thankyou for all your comments your wonderful stay strong

Love Always
Jenn
and keep writing

Another brilliant poem. I do know how you feel because your poem said it so well. Thankyou so much for your comments it means a lot. I find you an inspiration. We are going to make it to a better place. I JUST LOVE ALL YOUR WORK

Aw I really like the ending.. its almost magical.. take care this poem is really intersting

A beautiful poem. you have portrayed your emotions brilliantly,

and that people DO notice me
but they just fail to care

that bit just there hit me, i realise, after reading your poem, thta this is the case. people do notice another in pain and hurt, but stick their nose in the air and walk away.
an old friend of mine had a stroke outside a shopping center, no one stopped to help, society today is so harsh.
anyway, i am starting to babble.
thankyou,aylz

That was a good poem cos it showed the truth. A lot of people, especially people you think are your friends, do give up tryingt o help after a prolonged period of your unhappiness. Keepwriting! xx

Excellent poem...thanks for the comment on mine...i love comments lol...i love your poems theyre so great...
XXX angel

I like this, i feel that way too, it's really sad 5/5

Sometimes I feel weak too, so I understand, but don't let other people's comments get to you, they probably don't know your situation.