Beth,
Just love it 5/5 it's a great/nice poem! Take care and keep it up ^_^

Aww, i seriously wish i could write happy poems, i love how you have a variety of stuff and your style changes a lot also which i think is an amazing thing to be able to do your really talented if you didn't already know that,

They all say forever,
But how long will it really be,
Until you fell no more passion in our kiss,
And give up on me,

that was my favorite part 5/5 awesome