Void of Darkness

by Michael D Nalley   Oct 9, 2005


Void of Darkness

While traveling through the void of space
Where the future has not shown its face
I thought of where this world has been
And all the lives it has held within

Small fragment of the universe
Some say blessed some say cursed
Loses counted where there is no gain
Endless years of endless pain

Oh darkness does the light dispel?
A destiny away from hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I loved it. Keep it up. *5/5*

  • 19 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Now that was deep! so strong! so moving! that was a great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    I think you spelt losses wrong, but that is just my opinion.
    You have an amazing collection of poetry...really, I might actually have the same by the time I'm fifty, as well.
    I liked the dark rhymes in this poem, and I wonder that it hasn't got more comments.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by HansRik

    Very well done indeed. The last couplet is just fantastic. Excellent poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by HJ

    Wonderful piece. Very thought provoking. For me it held a deep secret, the unknown, magic and superstition.

    Your friend
    Hayley

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