Painting

by JJ   Oct 9, 2005


Cotton white
faded in sky blue
rays of gold
stroked across,
tainting

blades of green
scattered.
mingled in the scene,
pretty violets, reds
yellows and blues

nature's melody
forever mesmerizing,
lost in the coloring
never to realize
its only a painting

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great JJ! that is a nice perspective to a painting!

    this structure seems really unusual! Maybe u r strting up a whole new style!

    thanks a ton for your nice comments and your faith.

    love, and luck
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Really good:) thanks for the comment

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow i love poems written about a scene. such as a painting its like Leonardo da Vinci and poe all together.

  • 18 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Wow outstanding poem. It was beautiful.

  • 19 years ago

    by Soft Rain

    I love this poem it seems like Im looking right at it. Love the ending and keep up the great work!-Claude

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