Ahhh i like the being of ..oh so niceeeeee really nice..5/5

Do you still not like this one? I'm thinking you must do on some level, or why post it? Anyway I have to disagree, I liked it, a lot. Your descriptions were original and conveyed the image of a delicate and naive little girl that has some severe torment in her life. I won't start with the capitalisation on ever letter because I know that’s "your thing" so of course don't change this. I suppose if you're going for “spot on” rhyming the fourth stanza could do with some tweaking. And, you may have over used the idea of "tears" in places, but apart from that this poem was fantastic. Very well done. Keep it up!

Wow......very powerful Nikki. very deep. im speechless. 5/5 XXXXX
JL

Nikki,
You are so talented. Words used just touch my heart...great job...

hugs, love, Ann

Omfg. fantastic. amazing. deep. 5/5.

You're so talented, this was absolutely brilliant, the imagery was absolutely flawless xx

Wow, your writing is amazing, i love it. Keep it up! Maybe you could take a look at mine and see what you think, I would love to hear what you have to say about them...Thanks And again amazing job!

Hey this is a really good poem, it's amazing.

keep writing.

xXx

This was awesome. please keep it up. 5/5

This is beautiful! It's so tragic, but you capture it so magnificently! I love the way you worded this, trul magical! Well done~Holly

Powerful keep on writing definatly one of the best by far 5/5

Datz so sad......but heapz well ritten

Incredibly sad! Very good work! Well done

Great talent

U write good poems. keep up the good work

That was excelent...I loved it so much!!! you have great talent..!! keep up the good work...:D Rock on!!!

Omg......... YOUR AWSUM!!!!! lol
keep it up