A girl at 14

by *secrets*   Oct 9, 2005


It started off
A girl at fourteen,
She loved this boy so much.

She would be so nervous,
Just saying Hi!
And would blush at the slightest touch.

Her friends told her,
To ask him out,
But she thought that would be way to s l u t t y.

He was seventeen, anyway,
And she could not talk to him
Without melting like putty!

She tried and she tried,
And she cried and she cried,
When ever someone would mention his name.

For everytime she looked at him
She was dumbstruck,
And her heart was to blame.

Hhis friends told her politley,
There was too much of an age gap between them.

And that he was worried he's given the wrong impression,
He certainly wasn't interested
And she was dreaming.

The poor poor girl,
Took all to heart,
But still resolved to love.

To love this boy forever,
She would be his angel above. This
is a true story, and, there is more to it, something along the lines of them getting together..would you like me to put a part 2 out?Plz commentIt started off
A girl at fourteen,
She loved this boy so much.

She would be so nervous,
Just saying Hi!
And would blush at the slightest touch.

Her friends told her,
To ask him out,
But she thought that would be way to s l u t t y.

He was seventeen, anyway,
And she could not talk to him
Without melting like putty!

She tried and she tried,
And she cried and she cried,
When ever someone would mention his name.

For everytime she looked at him
She was dumbstruck,
And her heart was to blame.

His friends told her politley,
There was too much of an age gap between them.

And that he was worried he's given the wrong impression,
He certainly wasn't interested
And she was dreaming.

The poor poor girl,
Took all to heart,
But still resolved to love.

To love this boy forever,
She would be his angel above. This
is a true story, and, there is more to it, something along the lines of them getting together..would you like me to put a part 2 out?Plz comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amy

    Hi this is pretty well done. definatly a little thought put it into it. good work 4 that.
    my only comment is try 2 ignore the rhyme if it isnt going to work 100%
    i know im a hippocrite (or how eva u spell it) when i say that but yea... not my point lol

    keep writing. u definatly hav talent
    luv ya
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by KayCee

    I like it but why was the age a gap ahe is just a number

  • 19 years ago

    by yes-i love you

    That was really sweet. thank u so so so so much 4 my comment it meant heaps to me. my addy is kindy_gumsucker707hotmail.com x x x