That was really sweet. thank u so so so so much 4 my comment it meant heaps to me. my addy is kindy_gumsucker707hotmail.com x x x

I like it but why was the age a gap ahe is just a number

Hi this is pretty well done. definatly a little thought put it into it. good work 4 that.
my only comment is try 2 ignore the rhyme if it isnt going to work 100%
i know im a hippocrite (or how eva u spell it) when i say that but yea... not my point lol

keep writing. u definatly hav talent
luv ya
amy