Great poem, very honest and heartfelt. I really liked the concept. I think that one the hardest thing to do when writing is writing from the heart, you tackled it with grace and style.

I look forward to reading more from you.

Kind regards
Hayley

Another awesome poem. it's very personal and meaningful. excellent work matthew xoxoxo
-suzie

Fair enough, it's not great in my opinion but worth atleast 3

WOW this is really great its definately worth a 5
I dont know why you've only got a 4
its soo good
expertely written MAtt
keep it up
Em