Aww hun, wow i felt like that was me in the poem, it is fantastic my dear, you've expressed yourself very well in this one, wow dont know what to say the poem speaks for itself, breathtaking, keep it up hun love yaa

This was great i can't relate as i dont have many family problems but i think you did a fantastic job of expressing yourself because i kinda feel i know what your going through (even tho i dont lol)

All these destructive thought,
How i wish i was dead.

but there since you are saying you wish you were dead i think *all these self destructive thoughts* would fit in better with these lines

great job tho 5/5

This was so sad..hope that youre okay!!! member you can always talk to me xxx

I just want to say thank you for the comment, i very much appreciate it. This poem is very strong and relatiable and I hope we can just overcome what we have to face.

God Bless

Aww that was so sad but the poem was really good though. Keep up the great work and stay strong. Luv Nicole =)

You took my breathe away...that...is...very...wow...i...can't....talk...hu...hu...lol...

Okey...now I'm fine...you really took my breathe away...I'm still finding it...and this poem rocks...one of the best I've seen...seriously...IT'S AWESOME!

Thats really good