Wow thats such a deep and powerful poem! I liked the repetition of the first 2 lines and when u said them again in the last stanza...Great job! Keep up the amazing work 5/5

I love it, hun. It's so hear felt and warming. I understand it perfectly.
xxxxxx

Aww omg, this poem brought me to tears, aww hun wow, i can so relate to this its amazing, im very emotional right now hehe, great work hun wow, -sobs- keep it up lubb you

Awwwww hun!! that wa so sad and in a way i relate 2 it!! i realli hope ur ok!!! it was an awesome wirte!! remeber im here 2 talk and love u lots!! xox

Such a sad write, i hope things are ok now and stuff or that it improves. this was a really good poem i enjoyed it a lot it had a whole lot of emotion writen in it.

~Jacklyn

Ow hun...
what happened?? did u guys talk? i mean actually TALK?? email me n let me know what's going on. fill me in.
i miss you! love u.
take care xoxoxo

Thats so sweet, cause sometimes we don't realize how much we actually hurt people sometimes, so good for you i liked this alot 5/5

This was just amazing, you put into words exactly how i feel about my dad!!! i absolutely loved it xxx

Aww that was so sad but so amazing. It was a really deep poem and I can relate to some of the things you are saying. Yeah, i haven't been writing much lately...kind of lost my words for writing but hopefully will regain it soon. Keep up the awesome work and stay strong. Luv Nicole =)

I'm not really sure what happened with you and your dad, but this was a great poem, and I'm sure if your dad did see it, he would love it. I really enjoy reading your stuff^^

Wow...the poem holds very deep meaning...you are a good girl...and your daddy will know that someday..

Give me a smile...=)

Hey that was really good, a lot of feeling, but unnfortunately it was sad:(. i hope this isnt true, but either way, good poem. keep it up.

OH, and where in australia? if u can add me on msn....volcom_stoner1@hotmail.com

Hi, this one is so good!! very touching. lovely poem...take care..(5/5)

I love it, hun. It's so hear felt and warming. I understand it perfectly.
plz read mine and comment tham to

Wow that was a very good poem! Keep it up! I'm going to read some of your other poems. If you get a chance could you take a look at some of mine?
Thanks,
~Heather~