Left Unknown

by SealedWithAKiss   Oct 9, 2005


Falling up
Into the sky
Upside down
You don't know why
Counter clockwise
Inside out
So many things
To figure out
Torn between the life you have
And the one you loved so much
So close to reality
Barely out of touch
Not quite knowing
Where you are
Or if you'll make it
Very far
The world so different
Through your eyes
All you see
Are countless lies
Drifting from the dreams
That you strived to follow
A life once so full of love
Suddenly feels so hollow
And when your world
Came crashing down
They promised
They would be around
Never expecting
To be on your own
True feelings left unknown

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  • 19 years ago

    by justeene

    Hey nice poem keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I like it good flow, wonderful poem. xD Keep up the great work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Andrea

    Very intertesting. it kept me thinkin, good job

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hey, I liked that, it had spunk!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    This was a very nice poem to read. the first lines were very alluring and made me want to read on. you're off to a very good start! keep up the good work!