The Perfect Girl..The Perfect Beauty..The Perfect Suicide

by lOVER   Oct 9, 2005


Zoom in on this young girls life,
Okay Lets start from the beginning when she had the knife,
Curious to know what it was like,
She took a hurtful but deep strike,
Blood flowing down her wrists,
The more she grew addicted to the slit,
She knew it was wrong,
But the feeling so strong

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

She Went to School the very next day,
With a smile on her face and nothing to say,
Hugging her friends to her surprise,
They asked her if she was okay,
And she told a lie,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

She Went home,
Kissed her mum on the cheek,
Her happiness on the mountain peek,
Going Up to her room,
A few hours later there popped up the moon,
Her boyfriend rang,
And there he sang,
Smiling and saying I love you,
Ãbout To Hang up he said I love you too I'll see you soon,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

Hours Later she got bored,
Before She went out she prayed to the lord,
Forgive me for my sins,
Me hiding them with stupid grins,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

Standing Infront of that full length Mirror,
She began to see herself much more clearer,
Tears Welling Up Into her eyes,
Realising her whole life was just a bunch of lies,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

So Intense,
So Caught Up,
Going back to the moment with that dear old knife,
She gave out a silent cry,
Hoping this was the day she would die,
She took down those pills but still not feeling ill..
Filling Up the bath to the very top,
She slit her wrists so deep and long,
Her arms not feeling so strong
Before stepping In she stopped,
Having a second thought but the pills kicked in,
This was god replying to her sins,
Falling into that suspenseful bath,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

Her boyfriend running up to see her,
Holding her just to be nearer,
Screaming out his lovers name,
THIS ISNT JUST SOME F%^&^*^ GAME!!!!!!
Tears filling quickly into his eyes,
Screaming out a million cries..
Moaning the pain out of his body,

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

The funeral day came,
Everyone not feeling the same,
I thought she was happy,
I thought she was healthy,
Last night..
Was the night i was going to ask her to be my wife..
He cried and cried for days at a time,
A beautiful girl had committed a sorrow crime..

The Perfect Girl,
The Perfect Beauty
Has Committed The Perfect Suicide....

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  • 18 years ago

    by .Clearly.Invisible.

    I Love This Poem!! It is soo good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    This is so sad!! but i loved it!

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