Comments : Time With You

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful, loved it, beautifully romantic!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Bill, this is a beautiful love poem, as I have said before, the best love poems come straight from the heart. When reading your poetry you can feel the love that you have for Stephanie, she is one lucky lady. I absolutely loved the ending to this poem. I can relate to this poem more than you know, especially the line:
    “If I had known that you would come into my life
    I would have lived a different way”
    I am glad to see you have found happiness in life, which it is, something we all long for. Take Care! Brooke~

  • Awww wodnerful job...5/5...this poem is very touching and i know how you feel. I wish I could go back in time and have more time with my b/f that I have now..because he is the best thing that has ever happened to me and he has changed me for the better. wonderful job...such emotion....5/5.
    xoxoxo,
    Crystal

  • 19 years ago

    by Crystal

    Wow!! Wonderful job on this poem. I think it is really sweet and very loving. Your wife is really lucky to have you and by the sounds of it, you are lucky to have her. GREAT JOB!!

    Crystal