Comments : Spacious dreams

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    That was lovely Allura.

    The flow was content as if natural, and the words were simple yet perfect.

    You related your indefinite point well. From what I gathered from it, fear is your worst enemy.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashelin

    Hmm...the last few stanzas rhymed and flowed really well, but perhaps you could fix up the first ones so they flow just as well?