Comments : Depression:Chapter I

  • 19 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    This poem is about my one true love that i lost so please comment on it THanks A lot!!!!!!
    Love alway Jayma Aka Alovelifehurts bkaLOVEHURTS

  • 19 years ago

    by Delanea

    Great poem i really know how it feels its this really true about everthing you put in there!!?

  • 19 years ago

    by dora

    0hh hun deep t0pic. very well written but. t0uching
    n heartfelt!! great j0b 0n expressing y0urself! keep
    it up! catch up s0on h0ney! =)
    l0tz 0f l0ve d0ra
    -*x00o00x*-

  • Hey girl..This poem is very good but very sad. Please don't do anything..Trust me I have wanted to ALOT but it is best if you don't..It will hurt the people you hold close. This poem is very good though..I honestly know how you feel so if you ever need me feel free to email me...5/5..
    Crystal
    p.s. comment on more of my poems and i will comment on more of yours....

  • 19 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey great writing, a guy is not worth your life so stay strong xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by angelprincess

    Thats a great poem I have to say but I also know how it feels but you got to let him go, hes not worth your love God has sumone way better then that for you even tho you probably dont think so at the moment, keep your head up and live for tomorrow not the past, remember the past is the past you can't change it the future is the only think you can change, Hope you feel better, if you want you might like some of my poems. laters

  • 19 years ago

    by Carrie

    Baby I'm not doing so good
    Depression is what they say
    Because I'm so incomplete
    because the only person i love
    is gone away

    ^^^faveeeeee part. loveit

  • 19 years ago

    by Rajkamal

    Great poem. Just always remeber, you'll find da right guy, so dunt through away your life.

  • 19 years ago

    by lilia

    Wow!!! amazing!! i love it , this touched my heart and made me cry, very sad and depressing, i hope everything works out for you. please check out my poem, it means alot. thanks
    ~lilia~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikkey

    Great poem! I love it! keep it up! and thanks for the poem too. I means alot!!5+
    =)