I liked it in a very srange way. I, myself am an atheist and seeing the way you doubt the way they make you believe is something really interesting. I though it was worded very well and throughout your doubt could be noted. Very nicely put.

Yeah....definatly bait....good poem i think your like tried to rhyme at the beggining and then after you realized it wasnt working i think you gave up but i guess thats okay i think this poem could have used a stronger vocabulary as well but i do like the idea so good job

Wow, good job, I loved this poem and the flow! It was great! I expecially loved the last line! Amazing! Good job again!
Love always,
~BJ~

Really nice... you've expressed yourself well. You've put some good ideas across. I liked it alot.
Thanks for your comment, on my poem, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

GREAT POEM!! I love it, keep up the great work! 5/5

The poem accents the difference between religion and spirituality.. good job

Lovely poem. I love your writtings. Keep up the great job. (Sorry this comment it short, I'm really tired and it's late)