I have a long list
in which I doubt
I'll ever make it
through to the other side
it's not possible
I hang on the edge
falling down
all I ever seem to get
is all the pain
different feelings
different motions
I can't explain
where I'd rather be
the truth is I don't know
just how far I can go
before I lose it all
Wow,
It's different, definately. But i liked it, different is good.
Keep it up, i found it really great, and i can certainly see that those 5 years paid off, for practice does make perfect.
Thanx for commenting on one of my poems months ago.. i am a bit slow.
:)Smile:)