This is really good, keep up the good work! 5/5

Wow...very intense...fileld with anger, rage, despair...keep trying your best to be positive Juls, even when you wanna give up hope

Thats really good i know what ur feelin the dont gave up i need u here
anna

Again ure emotions are deep and full of emotions , Strong emotions u show them in ure writing well !
Never give up hope !
Luv Crystal

Pretty good juls,i like it..
Im good at doing fake smile...
If ya need anything,im there for ya!

Very emotional writting, and well written. Great poem

Hey great poem juls keep goin at it!

~*naomi*~

Thats an awesome poem good job

Oh wow, really good wording, i could picture everything, good flow as well, u are talented! keep writing!

well done
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Nice poem

Wow...deep...5/5

~*♥Lollipop Sweetie♥*~

Hey .. i loved ur poem

Hey hun dis was gwd n i felt it...i know how u feel k..so take care.. n i'm here kk luv ya mwa

I comment on this one but i still think its great full of Emotion!

Youre poem hits home, youre really deep, and honest in your poems , i like that about you, keep writing they're gr8

Real deep good writing =)

Excelllent poem! Really very well written. I agree with the message. :)

Ana*

I know exactally what you mean!! great poem keep up good work!!

Great poem, but i think you should break up the sentences more.

Another great one, your talent as a writer flows freely from within, make sure it stays that was ;)