You're Gone. :'(

by ~Black*Rose~   Oct 9, 2005


You said you loved me,
and foolishly I believed you.

I gave you my all,
and you gave it all away.

I thought it was true love,
and you proved it was truly not.

Now that you're gone,
nothing is the same.

There are no words to describe,
this felling inside.

You ripped out my heart,
how will I love again?

I feel so foolish,
I should have see the true you.

You said you would love me forever,
and I actually believed you!

But no one will see,
how deep a hole you have left in me.

[This is unfortunately dedicated to Gilbert]

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  • 19 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. very nicely done.. sorry it took me soo long to write you a comment i have been soo busy.. but I am writing all five now! lol but i realli liked this poem esp. the begining 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Hey girl i am really sorry you had to go through this heartbreak i hope you get better in time, just take it day by day and lean on your friends. hope you feel better soon 5.5 amzing job nice job showing your feelings

  • 19 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I agree with the other 2 , your true writing talent didn't shine through in this poem and exept for a missing letter in one of the stanzas I thought it was good, keep it up,

  • 19 years ago

    by SealedWithAKiss

    I liked this poem! i recommend you use stronger words to help get the point across and try to make the readers feel what you feel. you know, that feeling that you can definelty relate to something. but aside from that, i thought it was very good.
    x0x0 heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I gave you my all,
    and you gave it all away.

    that was my favorite stanza

    okay i liked this poem it was very simple so i think it called for a better word choice but i like the message you put through but this poem really didnt make me feel your pain you know? like im sure you hurt pretty bad because the guy turned out to be a jerk but i just didnt get the strong feeling that i think i should have from this poem....4/5

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