by jhosy Oct 9, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
She glistens in the sun |
Short but very sweet. i like this one. i like the lines LOVE IS PLAINLY LOVE - ANS HER LOVE IS ALL I SEE. i like that. great work...as usual! keep it up! keannaxx |
That is short but oh so sweet. nice work! and thanx for your comments. i'll read our if you read mine ;) but ill tell you the truth...whether i like somethin or not. obviously this poem caught my eye and i think its great! 5/5! keanna |
by Miss Megan
That is so sweet and passonate..if u havent showed that special girl this poem...im urging to...she will melt wen she hears it....keep up the great riting!! |