You are so right as the years go by we only seem to hurt are selfs and i come to see that b/c the way the world is becoming many of us feel alone and find it hard to trust. nice joob keep up the good work

Wow.. very nice poem.. I really enjoyed reading it because you don't see many poems about politics and soceity and mankind on this site. But nice job. its good to be different! 5/5!

What i liked about this poem is that it is so utterly true, mankind is slowly killing itself and i think your poem expressed the ways in which it is killing itself very well. Another brilliant poem in my thinking