Wow, that was really good, KEEP iT UP! check out my poems and tell me what you think

Wow! lol usually I only say this to be nice..but on the odd occasion i really mean it, and..wow! that's amazing!... I'm gonna go read some more from you, hehe.

Great poem!!..i rele liked it...u poured your feelings out, and thats one thing that i love about poetry...keep riting....i love ur stuff!!*rates 5*
meg

Real good one... keep it up

Look you are so good at thins stuff I wish I had half of the talent you had!
Im also going to read some more of your poetry and comment
:)
see ya Ruby
Emma

Wonderful poem, i loved it! 5/5

~*♥Lollipop Sweetie♥*~
a.K.a
**♥MiMi♥**

OMG! THAT WAS SO GOOD! WOW!!! THAT IS EXACTLY ME! GEEZ...anyway..wow..u are really gr8! i hope to read more of you, im adding you to my favorites!
~*Who Cares?*~

Omg...this is so sad...5/5 I love it! Your very talented!
Becky
xoxo

You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!

This is just proved truth that you have a warm and friendly heart. Not many people can think about others when they feel they have so much to deal with on their own. To me, this made it clear that you are not selfish to any extent. WOW go girl!

I think this piece is quite well done - you've got a different rhyming pattern here and at first I didn't get it, but it's okay cause now I do! :P
I'd suggest on the last stanza changing the line from 'who cares if I want to die' to maybe, 'or if I want to die' because otherwise it detracts away from the rest of the pice.

ONE I TRULY RELATE TO....GREAT JOB..

KAYLA XOXO

Great poem, keep it up. The way it was it is very well thought about.
It is a masterpiece.
you are very talented
xxxx
tara xxx

Awe... beautiful... very well written...

keep it up

sammie

Once again, beautiful work. I loved this poem.

Awww
fabulous poem
congratulations on coming 3rd too by the way
you should be proud of your superb poetry
Garlic Teaser

Omg that is so beautiful...

I really like this one. *5/5*

WoW.....deep..amazing....crazy.... beautiful... the list could continue.. you are so talented. and it truly shows in this poem.. its alot like how i feel all the time. i always help others and never mention whats bothering me to them. this is truly a masterpiece!!

*applauds*

←♣Lauren♣→

Really like it 5/5!