That horrible night

by kittykat0232   Oct 10, 2005


The night was ending and my mind was racing
With each heart beat the knife was escaping
Escaping my hand right into my chest
Until my heart beat no more with my head on my desk
Life was pointless without his love
Life had fallen apart
Nothing had meaning,nothing had hope
All my illusions had gone with his love
Why i killed myself that horrible night
Why life ended with all that fright
No one will ever know how my life had fallen apart

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tiffani

    I kno how it did. ive been there and done that too many times. im sorry but things will get better. i dont mean to say wat ever one else does that "ull get over it" cause wen u love someone enough u truly never will get over it. but it WILL get better....

    great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by my name is Llama

    This is an xcellent peoms, well done and i think it's gud that it was kept sort, it's way more efective that way. i read ur other featured peoms and there also heaps gud and thanks 4 reading and favouriting me i will do the same as u deserve it.
    keep up the gud work
    edwina
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    5/5 excellent! i love writeing about this kind of stuff to.

  • 18 years ago

    by mel

    I love this... you keep it real n i giv you madd propZ fer that

  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    It was great poem just try make it rythme all the way thru then some og your poem otherwise it was great..........xoxo Rach

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