Good poem i liked it. It was different but thats what made it good well keep up the good work and always keep it real!

Wow..... That's great, babe!!! You're good.. Wonderful flow.. It's beautiful:) Everything went together so perfectly... It's amazing :D

~Jessica

Hey i reli luv yr riting...u shud keep riting...keep it up k..5\5
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Hey its nadia jst changed ma name but yeh rite sum more lol i wana read more of yr poems der reli great work...
well ltk to ya soon
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I really enjoyed this, it's different but it makes it your own. Beautiful.
"Afraid to look
As clear as day
This plan has long been underway
I hear them call
I cannot stay
The voice inviting me away"
I loved this stanza. 5/5, Em