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by cowgirlstar26 Oct 10, 2005 category : Love, romance / lost love
Knock on the door you turn me away you'll never see the pain behind my face you throw rocks at my window in hopes I'll come out just so you can use me and fill my head with doubts you say you love me when it suites your purpose but your the one who doesn't see I'm dying beneath the surface you walk me to classes, and flaunt me in front of your friends "wear that one shirt tomorrow" you say as our day begins you watch my every move, so I won't do something that you would make you disapprove I told you, what you see is what you get I swear that over time it's the real me you forget you wonder why there's no more sparkle in my smoky blue eyes I tell you everyday that I wont change for you and everyday you tell me about some way to improve so when I have conformed to all your stupid preppy friends that's the day, when our relationship will come to its final end
by Jamie
This was my favorite poem so far...rhyme and flow was perfect. the only thing wrong i think is the very last lines i dont think you ended this strong at all but 5/5
by LadyPearl
Cool topic, easy to relate. Nice job ~the flow was a bit off in some places