Not bad. Keep it up. You expressed loneliness perfectly. And thank you for the comment on my poem. I really appreciate it.

5/5 that was good, and you got the poetry skill, your good. keep it up i put you on my favorites, so i hope to see some more perfct work, that s outstanding, i like them both,
Kacey

Aw man das really sad, bein alone sucks big time, well written tho

The deepness of isolation in this poem is so great. very good write 5/5.