Awsome write as I expected keep it up hun
5/5

I was left speechless with this one. Your poem was mellifluous. Wel done M'Dear.

"memories of joy into my day
everything back to cherished ways "

These two last lines are brilliant.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This was really good, had to go back and re read some a couple times cause it was confusing but that probably cause i had two cans of moutain dew and i cant hold still LOL anyway 5/5

Hi
is a nice poem... u could write it as

"memories of joy into my days,....ways"
would rhyme better...
its really a dark poem & is touching as well
is so intense with emotion i can just feel the emotion as i read it !
lovely
amy

You have a wonderful grasp of subdued word form, it suits very well.

This was my fav part...:

"Eyes of shadows, bound me tight
A world of blood I shall fight
Again I drown in my distress
life of misery bound to a mess"

this is soooo full of emotion. i loved it u r very talented...imma have my eye out for you...doin a great job...5/5 once again
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Wow great job, full of emotion.. You're very good keep it up =) 5/5 again

Wow! so full of emotion! You are a great poet! Keep up the wonderful work! My fav. stanza was:

"A touch, a drop of crimson taste
despised, rejected in distaste
fallen angel grow in me
The only person I can be"

It flowed so beautifully together, as did the entire poem! Wonderful job!
Love always,
~BJ~

Awesome right.
I love the last stanza, and also this one;
"A touch, a drop of crimson taste
despised, rejected in distaste
fallen angel grow in me
The only person I can be"

The poem just.. flowed beautifully. You are a wonderful poet. 5/5

Saiya

Wow! this is truly great. I love the emotion that is diplayed...Keep it up

xoxo,
Kayla