My Baby Girl

by Jenn   Oct 10, 2005


I don't know what it is
I don't know what to do
but every time i look at you i smile
my life lights up
my heart soars free
you mean the world to me
my heads says no
and yet my heart won't let you go
it hurts so bad
this love i have for you
It hurts so bad
yet i can't let you go
i need you
i want you
hold me
tease me
touch me
please me
but please
never ever
leave me
for i could not bear it
you are my light
my shining star
the darkness fades
and you are all i can see

I love you more and more each day

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  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow this is great... !
    nice flow
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Thie title and the poem itself confuses me. I thought you were talking about your little baby girl, but then you wrote:

    "hold me
    tease me
    touch me
    please me"

    I doubt you would write that about your darling baby girl.

    So I'm assuming it's something esle.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    It was a really sweet poem. Great job! It flowed very nicely. Awesome job!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Awww this poem is sooo good...i really enjoyed reading it...seeing that u r like older than me...i really look up to u now...u r a wonderful wonderful writer...5/5...keep it up

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