Awww this poem is sooo good...i really enjoyed reading it...seeing that u r like older than me...i really look up to u now...u r a wonderful wonderful writer...5/5...keep it up

It was a really sweet poem. Great job! It flowed very nicely. Awesome job!
Love always,
~BJ~

Thie title and the poem itself confuses me. I thought you were talking about your little baby girl, but then you wrote:

"hold me
tease me
touch me
please me"

I doubt you would write that about your darling baby girl.

So I'm assuming it's something esle.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wow this is great... !
nice flow
5/5
love
amy