Falling

by TeArS R FaLLiNg   Oct 10, 2005


Falling, i am falling so very fast
i can not stop falling down
i am falling so fast
falling without a sound

will you catch me at the bottom
and take my pain away
or will you leave me there
to cry broken and alone each day

will you fall with me
so we can make it back together
or is it too frightening for you
to be trapped for what seems like forever

will you realise that forever is just a day
when you are in this much pain
and experiencing it alone
makes you go insane

will you notice when i am falling
when i fall right past your eyes
will you hear me screaming
will you notice my broken disguise

will you please open your eyes
don't let me fall, don't let me go
you say you can see my pain
but it's on the inside where it doesn't show

will you promise not to let me fall
please hold on to me so tight
make sure i don't fall
i don't want to lose this fight

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i loved it so much!!!!!!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Nicole Rae~

    I love this poem!!....I can relate to it!..Its amazing...It is soo deep in emotion,and I love it..Keep writing, you are rly good at it!

  • 19 years ago

    by skyfox

    Another masterpiece.Like Stacy the lines
    will you notice when I'm falling
    When I fall right past your eyes
    just hit such a chord. it is almost like you are in my head. Your talent just floors me sometimes

  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Brilliant poem, i loved it, nice work xxxx

  • This is a really good falling and just shows how sometimes we depend on people to help us when we are failing! its really good and had an amazing flow, i reeeeally liked it

    well done
    xxxxxxxxx

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