Touching and well written. Excellent use of language to convey feeling.

Def. Agree with Sunny and Bill...terrific choice of words in this peice!! I loved it especially the part when you said "please tell me these pearls are a new trend" ....awesome awesome awesome!!
~Chelsey~
5/5

This is an amzingly powerful poem, and it has a good use of words and implications.

keep going:)

xxXxx

Really well done, keep it up

Wow, I loved the choice of words you used.
You show true talent.
Much love
Emma x

I love this poem, you showed alot of emotion, and i like that. great job.

I loved it, it flowed well and showed such a good comparison

well done
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I like that poem a lot...it has a deeper meaning to it. A lot of poems lack that thought, so I really enjoyed this one.

I dont have the words to say it, except that the poem was brilliant!!! i loved it

Simply Amazing!! Good Job!

Beautiful write Renee, so deep and amazingly put together. I love the way you put your sentences and the form you get your words out in. It's so magnificent, I wish I could write like you do. You amaze me. Keep your head up, and take good care,

Love always,
Mortalidaga.

How the hell do you do it? How do you write of things the way you do and have it make sense? You're an animal I tell you!!!! Excellent write Coonay! You're writing always amazes me. Since I don't get on at work anymore I'm rarely on at all...so I miss a lot of your poems and it's hurting my feelings. I feel an all nighter on the computer coming on. Terrible isn't it?! HAHAHA Anyway awesome write...as usual. AND YOU KNOW THIS MAAANNN

The other poem...as I explained to Britt...started out about my brother and his family leaving. They moved to North Carolina...(well first to Texas) Anyhoo it ended kind of awkward - like a mushy love poem...so it kind of ended not really being about anyone...when really I guess it IS about my family. I must say them leaving as truly brought my spirits down. My sister in law called me today and she told my nephew to say Nat-Nat and he did and it broke me heart!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH lol I guess I'm ok though...

Alright love I'll talk to you later....I've been trying to write the last couple of days and this is the first thing I've been able to complete so I'm on a roll!!