by Ashelin Oct 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Together, hiding in secret |
by Lauren Beam
Sweet deal! i like that one!!!! it is really emotional at the end i like how you but the words together!!! |
by Leona
Great job i love this one..... |
by Carmen
In the very last sentance, 'moonlight' should be 'moonlit'. i think if you stated why you wanted to keep the love a secret, it would've sounded better |
by Ashelin
Oh thanks Seagal. It's nice to know people enjoy my writing. |