Oh thanks Seagal. It's nice to know people enjoy my writing.

In the very last sentance, 'moonlight' should be 'moonlit'. i think if you stated why you wanted to keep the love a secret, it would've sounded better

p.s- if you could , will you plz check out any of my featured poems? thnx

Great job i love this one.....
-Leona

Sweet deal! i like that one!!!! it is really emotional at the end i like how you but the words together!!!

~*~Lauren~*~