by loixelle Oct 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
How am i supposed to forget you, |
by Carmen
I liked the repition of 'how am i' and 'every time i try'. i love poems thats use lots of repitition. i didn't like the flow of the rhyming, though. most good poems have a set hyming pattern, but this one had none. |