This has to be, without a doubt, the best poem i have ever read...
thank you for writing this

Wow, very nice job! i honestly loved reading it. It is without flaw. I wish someone would love me so muhc as to trade their wings in for me. Nice writing. Loved it xox. 5/5!!

It sounded way longer when you recited it over the phone to me...

"The pain of the world"

I think would had been better if you used:

"The pain of THIS world."

"Will follow were you go."

I think you meant "where". =)

My favourite line were:

"I would trade my wings for you."

Un-effin'-believable!

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(")-(") Arrivederdci!

Well written, excellent job!