Beautiful poem.I'll pray to god that your sister gets better. i hope god puts the strentgh in you and her. just keep praying. hope will come stay strong!

Wow sad poem made me cry.hope your sister is better.with prayers for you both.
candy

Oh hun, i hope your sister will be okay! please try and stay strong, if not for you but for her, i so hope she gets better, im here if you need me xxx

Don't give up girl...believe in god...if it's time...then maybe it will be better for her...and i will miss you...and i need you too...hope is always there k...let your sister be happy...don't let her feel sad seeing that you are...and i'm praying for her too...best wishes...email me okey...bye...

Oh hun, i"m here and even though i havent prayed to god for a long time, and I'm not even sure if he knows who i am anymore, i'll pray for you and your sister. if you need to talk i'll be here for you always, hugs-hayley

I will pray for her. if you need any advice, ask me. i also tried to commit suicide, but im done now. ill also tell my friends to. im here

OMG Sabrina of course i'll pray for her. I've been so sad just lately i havent been feeling like writing or reading poetry. I'm so sorry babe! I'm ok but am just so confused right now. Have brought myself to write a new poem although it's not too nice. It just explains my feelings right now. Amanda xxxx

That was an awesome poem. I will be praying for your sister. I've lost family b4 i know what it feels like. Ill pray for the best for you and your sister.

With lots of luv and prayers,
JaNeAn

I kno how u feel.my sister has tried this twice before,once with pills and another with a blade,but she came back to us each when she took the pills then didnt cut deep enough when she tried the other way.im srry she has done this.ill pray for her.(even tho it seems like god never does stop it)real good poem tho 5/5. i hope she pulls through!!

OMG, I'm so sorry that you have to deal with that. I will pray for you :) As for the poem itself, it was great! It made me so sad :(, but that's good because I felt the emotion. :D

"I come in and look at my sister
she is so pale and weak
I won't smile though I know
that a smile is what she seeks"

That's my favorite stanza in this poem :D It's awesome and so well-written!
Love always,
~BJ~

Wow.tear... that was a great poem and i will defently pray every night for you and your sister. im so sorry you have to go through this. i kinda know what its like i lost my older brtoher when i was 14 and i only knew him for 2 years but we was very close and his girlfriend took his life from me. i just hate that you and your sister are going through this. and i will pray for you guys....lots of luv and huggs to you and your sis.....missy

OMG!! i'm sooooo sry!!! i will pray that ur sister gets better!! thats a very good poem, but also very sad!! if god goes take ur sister its only cuz he has great plans 4 her in heaven!! be strong!! god will help u make through all this!! love ya lots, Holly

Omg that made me cry! this is so sad and im so very sorry. i loved this poem its so good!!

Omg :'( that is one of the most touching poems i have ever read. i'm so sorry for your sister and i hope she pulls through. I'll pray with you i promise...
chin up hun and good luck with everything xoxxoox

This is a wonderful poem, I hope your sister's ok by now.
Keep writing.

I'm praying hunny, I'm praying.

-mikochan

Your request is surely granted. Backed with such words, it would be difficult not to. Again, a powerfully moving piece.

Im so sorry 2 hear!!! i dont noe wat i wood do without my sister...i feel for u hunny!!!
i hope everythnig goeswell and im praying for u sweety!
if u need 2 talk add me
sweet_babii_gurl@hotmail.com
k hope to talk to u sooon...
**SaRa**