by Megann Lee Oct 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm just a girl, with one story to tell, you...It's just a cut, just a bruise, just a frown upon my face for you to notice somethings just not right. It's just a tear, just a drop of blood, just a smile upon my face, for you to notice somethings just not right. It's just a day. just a week, just a month, for you to notice something just not right. The more I cut, the less I eat, the better I feel. The paler I seem, the skinnier I am, makes me happier, in my head, in my mind. The more cuts I have, the scars they leave, turns my frown upside down. No matter how much you yell, tell me it's wrong, all I can do is tune you out. |
by MudkipzPlx
Awh..Megan..We Love You. |
by Riffy
Wow...This one was so powerful and held so much depth and emotion. he way you structured it was awsome! You're really talented. Life can suck. |
by Torn
Wow i really liked that. I didnt think i would because of they way it's written but it was surprsingly so easy to read..yet so sad:'( |
by HansRik
Nicely written! Well done. The poem is very effective in conveying the message. |
This was also a very good poem. I can relate to it and I felt the emotion. you have a good way with words. Just a minor thing on the paragraph thing. It's probably just me, but it's easier to read if it's not so jumbled together. Just a suggestion ;) 5/5 Great job, though. |