Xiomara

by Rusted x Heart   Oct 10, 2005


Watch as the folding surface
Bends the lonely light,
A vanishing emotion,
Out of mind and out of sight.

A drowning cloud in its reflection,
Where the dead mermaids lay,
Never altogether,
Always one, it goes astray.

The ripples of redemption,
Born from but a tear,
Amidst this sea of solitude,
Fate has brought her here.

The nymph of seven waters,
Collecting liquid pain,
She tidal-waves emotion,
For there's nothing left to gain.

09/10/05

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  • 16 years ago

    by Conrad

    Beautiful poem. I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Lovely!!! beautiful!!! breathtaking!!! unique!!! superb!!! truly wonderful!!! ... umm.... i really liked it! very descriptive and well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    Wow. I absolutly love this poem. Great job! Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie and Laura

    Wow there was like there had to be a double meaning...it was beautiful i kept wanting to read it i was completly hooked you are a great author and i admire your artistic ability...

    Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

    -Laura

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    Very awesome. i love the imagery and you use of words. fantastic and haunting

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