5/5. Lovely imagery, it really pulled me in. I enjoy reading poems like this because they seem to have a rare gloss to them. I can't explain it word for word exactly, but this poem is intriguing. Nice. ^_^

Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

I liked this poem a lot....very, very nice write. Ilike the fact that you didnt repeat yourself over and over. It was a delight to read!!!

Very pretty. gave off an eerie but calm and wet and dreamlike and ocean and AWESOME vibe, great job great vocab great flow great rhyming 5/5

I just heart the imagery used in this poem. It was a perfect read M'Dear.

"The nymph of seven waters,
Collecting liquid pain,
She tidal-waves emotion,
For there's nothing left to gain."

This was my absolute favourite stanza. I have no compliants here. =)

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wow...
This is incredible! the detail is spectaculer! (To tell the truth i am really surprised anyone else on this site new what a nymph was,) really impressive work, 5/5, I can't find anything negative about it whatsoever.

One word: BEATIFUL!!!! Omg, that was such a beatiful poem! Good job.. My two favorite lines were your last two:

"She tidal-waves emotion,
For there's nothing left to gain."

What a perfect ending, to a wonderful poem!!!!!!! Omg great job!
~BJ~

That was amazing! My favorite stanza, I'd have to say, was also:
"The nymph of seven waters,
Collecting liquid pain,
She tidal-waves emotion,
For there's nothing left to gain."
5/5

Your grasp of imagery is powerful and humbling, what I see before me is a true masterpiece.

Mysterious. Amazing imagery in this poem. It's so powerful that you don't need to know what it's about to enjoy it which is rare for me. Perfect. Thank you for sharing this piece.

Wow, thats an amazing poem, really great descriptions and imagery, your writing is excellent xx

I have to say this is eccellent! Great use of words and imagery.

Keep 'Em Coming!

You have a feel gift for using metaphors. this poem gices off such stronge pictures in the readers head. i love the title, even though i have no idea what it means. the sound of it really suits the poem. exellent work

Ruby

Wow, that was really well written, you are very talented. Hmm, I think I shall add you to my favourites :)

Quite nice, I agree with the rest.
That's in all honesty.
Although the "folding surface" at the beginning got me a little confused, it all made a weird kind of sense at the end.

Good Writing!
beth

You are very talented, i liked this poem alot. It was well written and again showed lots of emotion.
Keep it up
xxxxx Tara

Hey, i nominated this poem in a contest. hope you dont mind

Ruby

I love it. You sound like a very knowledgeable person and your poetry is beautiful. You are being added to my favorites and I can't wait to read more!

Wow this is so good i loved it excellent job 5/5

Haunting yet beautiful imagery that drew me in from the first word. Captured my attention so well that well just breath taking amazing.

Oh, wow! I wish I had found you before :) That was a great poem, flowed really well and the rhyming was excellent.

Peace. [Sole]