Aww...This is soo sad! But, you're an awesome poet! you're great!
*~*Amanda*~*

I like it!Its very good!It has a deep meaning..I can relate to it...

I love it..its sad though. Keep up the great work hun. 5/5
Juls

Hey i thought i already commented on this poem..oops lol but this sad poem as wel lol.. great work mwa
luv ya

You have amazing talent, and i hope your okay there is always a brighter side to dawn. love you.

I dont really like things repeating over and over again but you did a good job on this poem and that takes a lot of talent. 5/5