by Bluey! Oct 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Feeling sad when watching you, |
Oops..dammit...it looks like i got into your poem so much that i didn't even notice that i've read, rated, && commented on it before...=(...well..heh, i rated it again cause i forgot...and just now i found my comment. Sorry. lol, and it's still 5/5 |
Wow...thats good...its beautiful and touching:):)...thankyou soo much for ur comments..they made me feel special:P:P..and yeah im 14:P:P...Anyways, beautiful poem!!! |
by Mousie
Aww... that was really sad, but beautiful... i don't know what you mean, you're really not that bad of a writer! thanks for the comments... i'll check out some more of urs! |
by NannO
Aww.. that just made me cry.. i love it.. its so beautiful in its dedication and sorrowful words.. i adored the first stanza.. it reli stood out |
by Tara Kay
I really loved that poem, it was sad but really brilliant. keep it up |