Thank you!

by Bluey!   Oct 10, 2005


Like a cool breeze on a hot summers day,
You came into my life and swept my fears away.
You wiped my tears and smiled at me,
You made me see that i was free.
I was so broken, a lonesome soul.
You picked me up and made me whole.
Never wanting this to end,
Thank you once again, my friend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Short , swwet and meaningful!!
    not a lot of people can put meaning into a poem so short...fantastic job:):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    That was a sweet poem. It's always nice to have friends that will be there for you through good and bad.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    I really liked this poem. It was really superbly written. Thanks again. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I liked it alot very nice poem 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    I love it, you're very good
    I give it 5/5 again, nice flow to it

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