Wow that is an awesome quote/story that is just......unexplainable!

Wow thats realy good, it almost seams like its a true story

Omg i love your poem there all very ncie like very very nice, i right too but none of my even begin to compare to this omg i luv your poems!

WoW, this is a really good poem. Is this a true story? I mean I know it happens everyday in the world and that is sad, but did this happen to you or someone you know. Wow 5/5, I can really feel the emotion in this. It brought tears to my eyes. Keep up the good work. I like in the end she was alright.

Hay gurl omg dis is such a sad poem!!
ur really talented tho
keep it up

This is a very sad but good, and well written poem.It reminds me of a song i once heard. Good Job and keep writing!

That is very good and sad at the same time. that reminds me of a son by martina mcbride. keep up the good work.

I just want to say that your quotes make me feel like I'm not the only one in the world who feels the way I do! thank you so much! And you have GREAT talent, so jusr keep doing your best!

Oh my gosh I started crying halfway through this poem!! Wow... you captured the pain in a way that I couldn't do with mine. Wow... I don't even know what to say. I'm glad it had a happy ending, though, but I hope that this isn't based on anything that's happened in your personal life. Keep up the great writing hun, you're extremely talented

Oh my gosh I started crying halfway through this poem!! Wow... you captured the pain in a way that I couldn't do with mine. Wow... I don't even know what to say. I'm glad it had a happy ending, though, but I hope that this isn't based on anything that's happened in your personal life. Keep up the great writing hun, you're extremely talented

Oh my gosh I started crying halfway through this poem!! Wow... you captured the pain in a way that I couldn't do with mine. Wow... I don't even know what to say. I'm glad it had a happy ending, though, but I hope that this isn't based on anything that's happened in your personal life. Keep up the great writing hun, you're extremely talented

Woww* very touching.. you're a great writer & i really like your quotes

Xx

Thats so sad but beautiful and touching too well done 5/5

Aww this is so sad. I have tears in my eyes. This is such a great poem, it's so beautiful.

Wow! this poem was the best i have seen in months! i loved it! it brought tears to my eyes! i wish i could write something like that. If this was a real experience then it is so amazing how you put this in words! It reminds me so much of parents tthat dont love their children and it hurts me so much how i have everything and somebody out there has nothing and is getting beaten by their parents. all i want to say is thank you for showing the world what goes on in this world. if enough people read it then people will be more aware of the fact and the world will be a better place for children. i mean...its not a big chance that it will happen but it is a possibility. I get home everyday and read your poems and quotes and sometimes they refer to what happens in my life. at least thats how i feel sometimes. u have been an inspiration to me and i have started writing poems and quotes. check out my poems and quotes. well gtg. see ya

Wow! this made my eyes tear lol...u are a awesome writer...keep up the good work!!!

WOW THAT WAS GREAT! YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRiTER! i WAS i WAS NEARLY AS GOOD! WE SHOULD TALK SOME MORE SOME TiME! GiVE ME A FEW POiNTERS? OH && i WROTE SOMETHiNG NEW SO iF YOU HAVE TiME MAYBE CHECK iT OUT!

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Ummm my old nickname was missin jeremy. but now its this. and i have a poem that i would luv 4 u 2 see. it is called "the children" it also says inspired by miss invisible. well gtg!

Since i dont know ur e-mail then i will just write a comment on ur poem lol! ummm... yea "the children" was inspired by you. "loving Molly" inspired me to write that. yepp yepp. well keep up the good work!